Rewrite: Here we go again

Bit of a shorty today.

More notes of exceptional quality have come in on the animated fantasy-comedy, so opting to do a little more work on it.

Going into this one being open to the suggestions, but not saying “yes” to everything.

I really want to make this one as solid as it can be, and it definitely feels like it’s getting there. The end goal is to have it ready for next year’s early bird deadlines.

It’s also a good thing to work on this because I’d been feeling a bit stuck on the story of the new spec, so a little time away may be just what I need.

Wish me luck.

The reins have been reclaimed

The past few days have been the standard rollercoaster. Some good stuff, some not-so-good stuff, with a small percentage of the latter being very not-so-good.

But there were a few glimmers of hope within the darkness. More on those as/if they develop. Any positive vibes and crossed fingers are always appreciated.

During this time I was reminded of the phrase “Don’t worry about things over which you have no control.” I took that to heart, and it’s really helped.

There are SO MANY things about screenwriting that are out of our hands. Stressing out about them doesn’t do us any good, and I’d much rather work on the things over which I DO have control.

Things like figuring out the story of my new spec, coordinating with guests for my podcast, getting the crowdfunding ready for my short film, reading friends’ scripts and giving notes.

(Two little things that have really paid off – a few minutes here and there to interact with other writers on social media or email, and maintaining a “What needs to get done today” checklist.)

Taking care of any of these helps me feel productive and less stressed because I AM GETTING STUFF DONE. Some of it may take longer than hoped or expected, but each one constitutes a step in the right direction. Even just writing about it helps.

If you feel this way, just remember that you’re not alone and there are always things that you can do to help make your screenwriting journey a little easier.

Keep calm, stay focused, and maybe have some pie.

FBD is a BFD

Working on this new script idea is proving to be quite a challenge. It’s still in the very early development stages, so any and every idea is being written down for potential use. No doubt some will stay, some will be trashed, and some will be altered/revised/modified to varying degrees.

Adding to all of this is that a big part of the story is similar to parts of a very beloved and well-known film – so similar that it’s one of my comps – so I also need to come up with ideas so my story safely falls into the category of “Familiar, But Different” – FBD.

It’s my goal to have this story be reminiscent of that other one, but not so much that it feels like I’m totally ripping it off. I’ve read a lot of scripts that fall short of that, so doing what I can to avoid falling into that trap.

This film also has a lot of iconic scenes, so it’s even more important I put my own spin on the concept to really hammer home its FBD-ness. The absolute last thing I want is for somebody to read this and think “There’s nothing new here”.

A key part of this is breaking down the components of the original film – not just the story, plot and characters, but seeing what worked, how the various storylines and subplots were laid out AND how they were connected. I can then use all of that as a springboard to putting my story together, and then fine tune as necessary.

Challenging, but not impossible.

Great as it would be to have the final result ready now, finding a new way to tell this familiar story is part of what I enjoy about doing this. I like to call it “go for the hard turn”; Just when you think things are going to go a certain way, there’s a yank on the steering wheel and all of a sudden things are heading in a whole new direction that makes you want to keep going.

One thing I’m fairly certain will play a factor in putting this together is that I’m just enjoying working on it. I don’t think there’s anything like it out there, so there’s a certain thrill to exploring the unknown, so to speak. It’s a priority for me that when it’s totally done – no matter how long that takes – it makes a strong impression for both the story it’s telling and how it’s written.

Even though it’ll take a while for me to figure it out, I’m confident I can make it happen.

Can’t talk. Busy.

Mega-shorty post today.

Got some incredibly helpful notes for the animated fantasy-comedy, so some major revising is in progress.

Bonus – one set of notes was from a longtime associate who’s always been a big fan pushing me to do better. They thought this script did exactly that, and that it really shows how far I’ve come since my earlier work and what I was capable of. You love to hear that – especially from somebody whose opinion you hold in very high regard.

There’s a contest deadline coming up in a few weeks, so I want to make this thing as rock-solid as I can before sending it in.

Confidence levels feeling strong and steady.

Hope you have an excellent weekend that also involves feeling good about your writing, and maybe some pie because it makes things that much better.

Outlook: turbulent

Back in January, I’d connected with a repped TV writer who offered to read one of my scripts. I sent it, and promptly forgot about it.

Jump ahead two months. I ask if they’d had a chance to read the script. Turns out they did and not only did they love it, asked if I’d be open to them passing it along to their reps.

Like I’m gonna say no to that?

This writer also mentioned they’d submitted scripts from other friends and acquaintances before, only to be turned down (it’s a BIG firm), so I should be aware my chances of getting through were quite, quite small.

My response – “Totally fine. I appreciate you giving it a try, and will check back in a few months if I don’t hear from you.”

I set a calendar reminder and again promptly forgot about it.

Earlier this week, the reminder pops up. Since I hadn’t heard anything, I assumed it was a pass. No big deal. Still happy to have even gotten that far. There was also the possibility they just hadn’t got to it yet. I get that. I’m not a priority. Just to be sure, I emailed the writer.

The response:

“Sorry for the delayed follow-up. The truth is, it’s not that they aren’t interested; they just haven’t read it. The industry is struggling right now, and agents are swamped trying to find work for their current clients. They simply don’t have the time to consider potential new clients at the moment. Some reps are even being let go or leaving on their own.”

Naturally, a bit disappointing, but also not surprising.

These are uncertain times, chums.

Not only are reps being let go, others are trimming their rosters – although I have seen a few writers getting repped, so there is that silver lining.

Summer movies that seem like slam-dunks are underperforming at the box office.

Studios are drastically cutting back on their output.

More than a few times I’ve heard or read somebody using the phrase “stay alive until ’25!”. In other words, do what you can to hang in there until next year – when things might start to pick up. Emphasis on ‘might’.

Last year’s strikes may have contributed to all of this, but they weren’t the only factors. Things are just different now, and from my perspective seems like everybody is struggling to adapt and nobody has any solid idea how to do that. The harsh reality that some people don’t mind waiting a few months, or even weeks now, for something currently in theaters to switch to streaming is causing a lot of headaches.

Also not helping – studios looking at AI to help cut production costs. That certainly doesn’t bode well, for writers or for anybody behind the scenes.

From somebody in my position – just trying to break in seems even tougher now. The industry is being much more selective. It’s getting tougher to get your script noticed – my experience, anyway. Seeing lots of mentions of them wanting pre-existing IP, so not as much attention being paid to original stuff. Another challenge.

Sometimes it’s like the universe is determined to make any progress for somebody like me as difficult and as insurmountable as possible.

But like a lot of you, I’m stubborn as all get out, and not easily deterred. All I can do is keep trying, keep writing, make connections and establish relationships, and hope for the best.

I like to think things will eventually start to improve in some capacity. No idea when, but it’ll happen. Probably a safe bet to say it’ll be bumpy on the way there.

Just another storm for us to endure.