As part of my latest effort to get organized regarding self-marketing, I went through my loglines and tweaked them accordingly. Compared to their predecessors, they now seem to pack a bit more of a punch, which was my intent.
You never know the difference it makes when you add a word, take one out, or switch it out with a word you didn’t realize was stronger until after the actual switching.
The logline is what makes the first true impression on a reader. Does yours do the job you need it to?
Does the logline for your comedy offer up a funny premise?
Got a thriller or horror? Then that logline should jumpstart the goosebumps.
Do we eagerly anticipiate the pending rollercoaster ride for your action-adventure?
To utilize a somewhat clunky food metaphor, the logline gives us a sample taste for the exquisite meal we expect from the script.
That’s if the logline works. But what if you think it’s lacking the necessary ‘oomph’ it needs?
Y’know, visiting three major metropolitan areas in a week (four if you count the one where I started and ended AKA home) can really tire a guy out.
So while I work on readjusting to my native time zone, I’m also working on getting some writing-related affairs in order.
-Due to a last-minute family medical emergency, my manager had to cancel our face-to-face meeting. Bummer. And his assistant was up to his eyeballs in reducing his steadily-growing workload, so he couldn’t meet either. Double bummer.
Fortunately, there is a silver lining: I got emails from both the next day about the rewrite. Overall: great job, nice scene changes and choices, very solid structure.
Up next – a “high-octane” logline and synopsis. Although I’ve always had problems with the latter, I really like the sound of that particular adjective.
“High-octane.” Sounds fast, powerful and strong.
This is a fast-moving script with lots of swashbuckling action, so that’s the mood my 1-2 sentence description and 1-pager should convey.
The logline and synopsis are your best chances to really showcase what your story’s about, but letting the genre do the heavy lifting. Comedy – play up the jokes. Thriller – keep us in suspense. Horror – scare us.
In my case – adventure – both logline and synopsis should give you an idea of what kind of rollercoaster ride you’re in for.
I’ve written before about what a solid logline should include, but just in case: hero with a flaw, villain with a goal, the conflict between the two, and what’s at stake.
The synopsis has always given me trouble. It’s easy to get lost trying to accurately describe the story. You want to include all the cool stuff, but you can’t. As a result, here’s a tip I’ve found very, very helpful: focus on the main character and their storyline. Don’t worry about the subplots and supporting characters.
Although it comes from publishing, this may be a huge help for those also struggling with the synopsis.
You’d think after tackling a 100+-page script, writing the same story in one page would be easy. But it isn’t.
But it is doable. Like for a script or any kind of writing, you just have to work at it.
Visiting my folks this week, so not much time for writing. That being said, there are a few items worth mentioning…
-The Tracking Board Launchpad top 10 finalists were named earlier this week, and I was not one of them. It was a little disappointing to not see my name on the new list, but I can still claim to be one of the semifinalists, which is at least something.
The logline to DREAMSHIP is now officially posted as part of the contest update, so now it’s a wait-and-see situation regarding being contacted by potential reps. Which leads me to…
-Having an actual face-to-face meeting with my manager today, so I’ve been working on questions to ask and topics to discuss. Looking forward to hearing feedback on the latest (and hopefully final) rewrite.
This is a great chance for both of us to further explore what we’re both hoping to achieve, and what we can do to get there. Should be interesting.
-Your thoughts on summer movies so far? Hoping to see STAR TREK INTO DARKNESS this week, and looking forward to MAN OF STEEL next week. IRON MAN 3 was fun. No interest whatsoever in HANGOVER 3 or AFTER EARTH.
As much as I enjoy a lot of these fanboy films, it would be nice to see more original stuff (the forthcoming PACIFIC RIM, for example). Sequels, remakes and reboots can only carry you so far.
-The fine folks at United were generous enough to let us use the DirectTV for free on the flight here, so got to see WRECK-IT RALPH again. Still fun. Wish they’d do that all the time.