The original plan was to have a first draft of the low-budget comedy done by year’s end.
But just as I started (2 whole pages written!), a few more sets of notes came in for the western, which were added to the rest accumulated throughout the year.
I’ve written here before about how this script did not get the results I was hoping for. If I didn’t do something about it, that wouldn’t change.
As much as I love this script, the plain and simple truth is that it’s weak as it reads now. In the words of one of my note-givers, “it’s good, but has the potential to be a lot better.”
Among the comments in the collected aforementioned notes were several “What if…?” and “How about…?” questions. The general consensus was that parts of the story needed further development, and these suggestions might be worth considering in order to make that happen.
It was drastic measure time, which also meant making some really big decisions. Do I keep plugging away on the comedy just to get it out of the way? Do I attempt a major overhaul of the western’s story? And if I did that, how much of it would actually change?
There was no getting around it. It had to be different. Time for a new approach and new ideas.
So I’m rewriting it. In the truest sense of the word.
The concept is still the same, but the execution is what will be different.
Talk about daunting. Taking something you’ve practically obsessed over, jettisoning a sizable portion of it and starting anew. There are few things as intimidating as that blinking cursor at the top of a blank screen. It just sits there, taunting you, as if it were saying “Go ahead. Show me what you got.”
But here’s the silver lining: rather than abandon everything from every previous draft, I can pick and choose from of all of that material, which is now available for reworking, reshaping, re-whatevering.
Even more of a bonus: looking over all those notes on the western made me think something similar was in order for the mystery-comedy. So I’m working on a major rewrite of that too. I don’t know how I’ll proportion my time and focus between the two, but confidence, hope and ambition are all at significantly high levels as a result.
-And now, time for an IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT!
Since the rewrites will be keeping me busy over the next two weeks, this will be the last me-centric post of the year.
But don’t despair. Starting this Monday, and continuing EVERY WEEKDAY through January 2, a new post will be available for your reading enjoyment.
That’s right. Ten whole days of quality material to keep you company through the holiday season.
I think you’ll like ’em.