Currently in “full speed ahead” mode with the latest draft of the dramedy spec (coming along nicely, thanks for asking), so felt this was an opportune time to dip into the archives and offer up a few posts from the past couple of years.
Also made a point of trying to find the ones that are directly or semi-directly connected to this script.
Enjoy.
Moose, squirrel, and two guys in drag
Maximum Z 
I read one scene, three points. And you gave me a lot to think about. Like making by sure every scene is short and to the point and if you use something in a scene it had better show up in a later scene. It like if there’s a gun on a wall, you had better shoot it before the end of the movie.