I may have had a brainstorm regarding my antagonist. A really good one.
I’d mentioned before about the good suggestion from the writing group about how maybe the guy who steals Lucy’s train is somehow connected to her past.
A good idea.
As I’d also mentioned, I’ve been struggling with a more…tangible goal for Lucy besides catching the real thieves.
So today in the traffic studio, I worked on fine-tuning the opening sequence, which took a little longer than expected. Almost there, though.
But while I was working, the idea about Lucy’s goal kept creeping into my mind. I also kept going back to her history with the antagonist. What would it be? Details are still forthcoming on that one.
I also stumbled onto the idea of having the antagonist play a more significant part in Lucy’s past. A really significant part. On several levels.
I’d go into more details, but I’m still working on it. Suffice to say, this could represent a significant development in terms of what Lucy wants.
And it could be the break I’ve been waiting for.