Not the set-up for a joke, but a question that will be answered shortly.
I took yesterday’s work on the outline and inserted it into the main one today. Still have some gaps to fill in, but it’s coming together nicely. This is really turning into a rip-roaring adventure story, let me tell you.
But I couldn’t help but notice one thing about everything I had worked on last week, especially those scenes from page 45 to the midpoint. There were a lot more than I remembered writing. While it should be somewhere around 15-18, this was more like 27. Way too much! Some emergency editing was necessary.
As much as I hated to do it, I was going to have to get rid of the scenes involving a character I really like. That would be the somewhat rotund fellow in the title of this post. He and his flunkies would have to go. One of the many rules of screenwriting: Kill Your Darlings. So I did. The end result is still satisfying, but not as much as it was when I had two sets of double-crosses in the works. Now it’s back to one.
But all is not lost.
Since I’m now focusing on the next set of scenes, the midpoint to around page 75, part of those involve a mine. I don’t know what kind, but originally it was going to be abandoned. Not anymore. I’m working on turning it into a kind of hideout where this nefarious band of ruffians is currently holed up, thereby increasing the level of conflict in the story.
It keeps surprising me how writing something one day, and maybe jotting down a thought or line, even just on a whim, can really pay off somewhere down the line. I really like when that sort of thing happens. It’s almost a kind of self-vindication.
I’m hoping to have a Movie of the Moment for tomorrow. I haven’t had a lot of spare time lately, so I’ve had to spread my film-watching out over a few days. Surprisingly, parts of this film are eerily similar to DREAMSHIP. Crazy, huh?