The past few days have not been kind.
I thought I made some good progress with some slight revamping of the major plot points, at least in terms of my page 45 and midpoint. The problem was getting from what I had already developed to this new set-up.
I couldn’t figure out what to write. And when a writer doesn’t know what to write, it’s very frustrating.
It probably didn’t help that I read those two Black List scripts. The writing in those was really impressive. Mine? Not so much right now.
But I also reminded myself that those other scripts weren’t first drafts. I bet they had the same kind of problems putting them together that I am now. And that actually help me feel better. I know this will all come together in the end. It’s the gettin’ there that kills you.
Today, I was determined to make some kind of progress and move forward.
One of the things I always use as a placeholder during the outline process is a note to myself in a scene to WORK ON THIS or EXPAND! or DEVELOP.
Which is exactly what I did. I had a general idea of what I wanted to happen in one sequence, tried to play out the scenario in my mind and put it on the page.
And it worked. Which is nice.
Even better, I changed something in the scene right after that one that presents more of a challenge to my main character. Before, she was able to figure something out too easily, so I made it really hard for her.
Since conflict is vital to a good story, one of the best questions a writer needs to ask him or herself: what’s the worst thing that can happen to your character to make achieving their goal that much harder? If Luke and Co just stroll into the Death Star, get Leia and leave, that wouldn’t be much of a story, would it?
Before, this sequence came across as too easy for my heroine. Now, she really has to pull herself out of a really deep hole.
And now the fun really begins. I need to figure out how to have the three separate subplots tie together, and about 8-10 pages to do it in.
And I can do it, too. Not quickly, but I can. And will.
No Movie of the Moment right now, but V discovered the magic that is the Marx Brothers courtesy of Turner Classic Movies on New Year’s Eve. If you don’t laugh during the mirror sequence from DUCK SOUP, then something is wrong with you.