While V is playing her heart out, I hunker down in the car, armed with pen, notebook and iPad, working diligently to make some kind of progress.
Seems to have paid off.
I wrapped up Act Three, including making a few small changes and some not-so-small ones.
Now the fun really begins – cranking out pages.
My schedule permitting, I’ll shoot for my usual 3-5 a day. We’ll see how it goes, but I’m guessing the back seat will be more suitable on soccer days for typing than the somewhat cramped front seat.
-I guess it’s an unwritten rule that if you do a Western, trains have to figure into it somehow.
My next script is about an engineer out for justice and revenge. This guy wrote a Western involving a train with a supernatural angle.
I’m not complaining. There’s just something cool and fascinating about trains. Want proof? Watch this. Granted, not a Western, but still – trains are involved.
Not much to report. Still hammering away at the rewrite when I can.
I’m fast approaching the end of Act Two, and most of the changes I had in mind are being implemented.
Feels pretty good so far.
While it would be great to wrap it all up by the end of the week, I’m not setting any definitive goals just yet. Got to take my time and make sure everything is rock-solid.
But between you and me? Can’t wait to start on pages.
Soon. Very soon.
-Movie of the Moment – THE RAID: REDEMPTION (2011). Wow. Only 1/3 in, and everything I was expecting. And more. This may actually live up to the hype.
Feels oddly familiar and original at the same time. Nothing complicated, great set-ups, good establishing of characters.
Can’t help but think how different it would look if it were made in the US. I believe an unnecessary stateside remake is already in the works, but the Indonesia-based writer/director of the original said no because he’s working on the sequel. Smart move.
While it would be too easy to stick with most of what I had before and just make some minor changes, there’s a line in the notes I got over the summer that really stuck in my head: your hero has to be challenged more. The way the story plays out now doesn’t do that.
Something had to be done.
Now I look at every scene with the intent of changing it to not only make the hero the one moving things forward, but also to make sure he can’t just cruise through it.
This includes a key scene where the hero basically complicates things out of clumsiness, which was also commented on in the aforementioned notes. That definitely had to change.
I don’t remember which famous writer said it, but basically, if you get stuck, introduce a gun, or have somebody shoot a gun. Something like that.
And my hero has a gun.
See where this is going?
Without even realizing it, I had my character doing something I never thought he would. Or could. Now the dynamic of the scene has drastically changed, while keeping the purpose the same.
I’d heard about this before, but never actually experienced it myself.
They say your characters can really surprise you at times, and this was a prime example of that. Kind of makes me wonder what else both of us are capable of as the story advances.
Feels like things are about to get really interesting.
Fall is here! Time for pie! (subcategory – pumpkin, subdivision – whipped cream)
Packing was stress-inducing, but the move went smoothly (including movers who were reliably fast and efficient), and the unpacking stage seems never-ending.
But it’s all in the past now. Time now to realign my focus back on the outline and get things done.
Despite not having a chance to actually write over the past week, my creativeness was definitely being put to work, including coming up with a potentially stronger beginning. You don’t realize how much you miss working on a project until you’re forced to not work on it.
Suffice to say, I’m really hoping to be super-productive over the next few weeks.
-I’m fully recovered from last week’s half-marathon, and now have to resume training for the one next month in the City of Angels. I was hoping to get a run in tomorrow, but part of the move involved switching out TVs, so I’ve got to spend tomorrow afternoon waiting for the friendly neighborhood Cable Guy to show up and check stuff out. Unfortunately, the run will have to wait.
Always seeking the silver lining, I plan on utilizing my time waiting for him by either a) unpacking some more, or b) working on the all-important rewrite. Maybe a little of both.
-It’s been a while, but time now for the triumphant return of MOVIE OF THE MOMENT! – Up today: GHOST RIDER: SPIRIT OF VENGEANCE (2012)!
I think “disorganized mess” sums it up nicely. It veered back and forth between fun comic book-style popcorn flick and predictable, cheesy thriller. Nic Cage was all over the map, but seemed to be enjoying himself.
Too hard to sum up the plot, but something about the Rider having to prevent Satan’s representative on Earth from taking over the body of a 13-year-old boy. I think.
It wasn’t what you’d call easy to understand, which is especially surprising since David Goyer is one of the credited writers.
Possibly a minor complaint – not enough of the title character in action. Something like 3-4 sequences, including a humongous fiery mining vehicle, but I was hoping for more.
-I was originally going to write about emails and e-newsletters from screenwriters and screenwriting organizations, and how much I hate generic emails from screenwriting ‘experts’ that are nothing but spam in disguise, but there’s only so much you can say. Basically, pick the ones that work best for you.
-With our big move coming up in a few days, just about all of my spare time has been spent packing and running stuff over to the new place. Writing’s on the back burner for the time being; probably until the end of the week. Looking forward to jumping back into the DREAMSHIP rewrite.
-I’m planning on sending my script notes back to the writer later today. It’ll be interesting to see what the reaction is.
-Ran the Giant Race half-marathon yesterday – 1:57:12. Not too bad, but I was hoping to break 1:55. I’m not one to make excuses, but I think I could have done a little better if the start of the race wasn’t jammed into a narrow section of road. We were running with the 10k, so everybody was shoehorned in, causing a bit of a slowdown for about the first mile or so. I’ll be doing the LA half-marathon at the end of October, so fingers crossed.
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