For some inexplicable reason, my brain decided to cooperate and I was able to navigate a somewhat twisty-turny route that got me to the end of Act Two. After some self-inflicted nervous anticipation, it actually worked out better, and admittedly easier, than I expected.
But all is not sunshine and roses. There’s one short sequence that still bothers me. As it reads now, it comes across as too comedic, almost even silly, and it doesn’t seem to match the tone of the rest of the story. At the time it seemed great, but in retrospect…not so much.
My first instinct is to dive in and change it. But before I do that, I need to approach it from several angles. Does it move the story forward in terms of plot, character and theme? What other way (or ways) could this happen so it still maintains the overall feel of the story? How could this play out so it surprises and entertains the reader/viewer?
Granted these are things that should apply to every scene and sequence throughout the entire script, but they’re always in the back of your mind when you’re narrowing your focus.
-As far as I know, there are still some slots for this fantastic opportunity. If you can attend, I highly recommend it.
-I recorded a special summer movie preview edition of The Script Adventurer! earlier this week with some movie-loving chums. It was a lot of fun, and will air Monday at the usual time (1PM PST on radioslot.com).
I also found out how to break the bonds of your computer and listen to the show on your smartphone. Open your phone’s web browser, go to radioslot.com, click on ‘Listen Now’, then click ‘Listen Now’ under the Talk Slot section. On the right side of the space marked ‘Now Playing’, there should be 4 little icons. Click the left-most one – WinAmp. And voila! My dulcet tones should be working their way into your earholes. Let me know how it works for you.
Ain’t 21st-century technology grand? But sadly, still no jetpacks or flying cars.