I had to work New Year’s Day, starting at 5am. It wasn’t as bad as you might think.
It meant holiday overtime (always nice), the roads were extremely quiet, so there was a lot of downtime, which provided me with the opportunity I was hoping for: to hack and slash my way through the script, cutting out anything unnecessary. Turns out there was about ten pages’ worth, including an excessive amount of adverbs.
But it’s all gone now, and the script is that much better for it. Tighter, smoother, a faster read. 114 pages of potential cinematic goodness.
The professional feedback will have to wait for now, but notes from trusted colleagues are proving to be just as helpful.
Apart from a few tweaks, this script could officially be considered READY TO GO. A minor celebration will be held in the form of a trip to the comic book store.
The next few weeks will be split between researching and contacting potential reps and continuing the fine-tuning of the western outline (gotta keep the creativeness going).
-Awaiting delivery of my equipment to get the podcast up and running, so add contacting potential guests to the aforementioned list. More details as they develop.
-Movie of the Moment – THE HOBBIT (2012). Enjoyable, but way to0 long. Why exactly did they feel this had to be a trilogy? Two movies would have been fine. This is not the epic tale that LOTR is, and suffers for it.
Saw it with V. She liked it, and was genuinely surprised at the end because she thought it would be a single, self-contained story. She’s already stated her interest in seeing the next one. I can’t help but wonder how much Smaug will be featured in Part 2, and Benedict Cumberbatch doing the voice is an added bonus.
-V was also off for winter break, so there’s been a lot of crashing/vegging out in front of the TV. I’m happy to say she’s outgrown some of the inane kids programming she used to watch, and has discovered I LOVE LUCY. It’s easy to see why this still holds up today. She’s already watched the Vitameatavegamin episode three times, laughing hysterically each time. HuluPlus only provides parts of each season, so we’ll have to try Netflix to track down the candy factory episode.
When your 21st century child develops an appreciation for Buster Keaton and Lucille Ball, you must be doing something right.