Finally finished Act One today.  It probably needs a little tweaking, but for the most part I like how it turned out.

A potential agent once said the previous draft was good, but could use some ‘punching up.’ Until recently, I wasn’t sure what that was supposed to mean. But reading other scripts over the past few weeks, including ones that have circulated throughout the industry, really helped me understand how it could be accomplished.

My writing used to be simple, straightforward and to the point.  No flair. No pizzazz.  But this time I’m striving to have fun while I write, as well as make it fun to read.  So far, seems that way.